Where Is My Mind? - Comments

I have a feeling that you can give ol' Stephen King a run for his money. Good Lord, your horrors/thrillers are amazing! I highly doubt I can pull off a thriller, lol!
And finding out he was the murderer was like, HUH?! WUT?! It's perfect, really xD
Lovely job, once again! <3

I love this.
I notice how you always write horror/thrillers.
I'm not really a fan of reading them but you write them so well I feel like I'm there xD
I got so shocked when I saw that he was a murderer, I was like WHAT.
It's not too much either, it was just perfect, how you wrote it.
Really amazing!

Wow, I really liked it.
First of, I love how I was left in the dark for a bit. At first I was thinking he wasn't really that insane, maybe there was some sort of misunderstanding. But then I find out he's a murderer, and he turns on the doctor, it's just... you pulled it off. And I like how he doesn't believe he's insane. I think that's probably most realistic. Anyways, it was awesome.

You know what I like about this? I mean, other than the fact that it's named for the song at the end of Fight Club, of course. I love that you start this off with Bobby in the doctor's office and you've got the reader thinking, "Oh, he's not that crazy." And then WHAM! you find out he killed his brother.

Very nicely done. I really liked it.

I love this.
I love how he has no clue that he's insane, it's so real. In reality, an insane person doesn't know that they are insane.
You really pulled this off well, and I loved how he turned on the doctor, and was convinced that he was one of them.