Where I'll Find Hope - Comments

  • Emily Lane

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    I demand that you continue this! Lol, no but seriously, continue?
    August 29th, 2011 at 07:55am
  • astro.zombie.dee

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    Really like where this is going, I hope you continue it
    October 23rd, 2010 at 12:11am
  • sonya6w

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    :O Her uncle is Dan?! Was not expecting that...And I really liked that interaction between her and her family. It was sweet.
    I really like it so far. I can't wait for more! :)
    July 18th, 2010 at 08:12am
  • PensRock

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    Her ex hit her? How horrible. That's something that usually takes some time to get over.

    Oh Jordan - stay away from her K! Apparently she belongs to Flower. LOL

    Well finding out that your one night stand is your coach's niece is a big shocker. Can't wait to see how he handles that!

    Looking forward to more.
    July 14th, 2010 at 03:55am
  • Taylor;

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    This part gave us more information on Kendall and finally finding out why she left Chicago and decided to come to Pittsburgh, I suppose that's why she also looked familiar to Flower since she's Dan Bylsma's niece.

    But, I'm also curious now as to what's going to happen since she chose to run out on her boyfriend while he was away on a business trip.

    The comic relief at the end with Sid, Jordan, and her nephew was cute though and eased some of ill feelings from learning why she left Chicago as well. I wonder why she's worried about getting in trouble, you'd think MAF would be the one worried.
    Excited for more!
    July 9th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • putitinmy5hole

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    :) Staalsy haha.
    Thiss is getting good, as if it wasn't already!!!!
    July 6th, 2010 at 06:10am
  • dreamerforever

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    Short, but it was cute!!
    July 6th, 2010 at 02:55am
  • nealerfan18

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    aww what a cute chapter. i love it.
    the story just keeps on getting better.
    can't wait for another update
    July 6th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • urbanfan4ever

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    Sounds good!!
    July 1st, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • dreamerforever

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    I love it already and the banner is amazing!! *subscribes*
    June 25th, 2010 at 08:31pm
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    Like it so far! Can't wait 'till the nest chapter comes out! :) It's awesome so far! :D
    June 25th, 2010 at 07:56am
  • Rylie_

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    It's good so far.
    Can't wait to see how this goes
    June 24th, 2010 at 09:29pm
  • PensRock

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    YAY! You posted the MAF story!
    Now this is a story I'm going to love.
    Kendall and Marc sure started off with a bang.
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    But don't forget your goal. I won't say what it is, but I'm glad you're up for the challenge. :D
    PS: I feel important since I know who her uncle is. LOL
    June 24th, 2010 at 03:25pm
  • Taylor;

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    I like how you do typically incorporate real life situations into your writing. I am curious to learn about what consequences their one night stand together will have since, the foreshadowing suggest that they had some contact with each other in the past.

    Marc-Andre thinks that she looks familiar and Kendall mentions that her uncle will be disappointed in her. I have so many little questions now that I want answered.

    Sounds like a good beginning, can't wait to see where you take it.
    June 24th, 2010 at 11:33am
  • putitinmy5hole

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    Of course this is awesome, subbing now!
    I love maf :)
    I wonder if her uncle is important like a player or Dan bylsma or something LOL. Or Maybe he's just a fan.
    June 24th, 2010 at 09:55am
  • nealerfan18

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    I love it. Amazing chemistry between Kendall and Marc-Andre. I can't wait to see what happens. Amazing beginning from a great writer.

    Update please :)
    June 24th, 2010 at 09:36am