:O Her uncle is Dan?! Was not expecting that...And I really liked that interaction between her and her family. It was sweet. I really like it so far. I can't wait for more! :)
This part gave us more information on Kendall and finally finding out why she left Chicago and decided to come to Pittsburgh, I suppose that's why she also looked familiar to Flower since she's Dan Bylsma's niece.
But, I'm also curious now as to what's going to happen since she chose to run out on her boyfriend while he was away on a business trip.
The comic relief at the end with Sid, Jordan, and her nephew was cute though and eased some of ill feelings from learning why she left Chicago as well. I wonder why she's worried about getting in trouble, you'd think MAF would be the one worried. Excited for more!
YAY! You posted the MAF story! Now this is a story I'm going to love. Kendall and Marc sure started off with a bang. Can't wait to see what happens next. But don't forget your goal. I won't say what it is, but I'm glad you're up for the challenge. :D PS: I feel important since I know who her uncle is. LOL
I like how you do typically incorporate real life situations into your writing. I am curious to learn about what consequences their one night stand together will have since, the foreshadowing suggest that they had some contact with each other in the past.
Marc-Andre thinks that she looks familiar and Kendall mentions that her uncle will be disappointed in her. I have so many little questions now that I want answered.
Sounds like a good beginning, can't wait to see where you take it.
Of course this is awesome, subbing now! I love maf :) I wonder if her uncle is important like a player or Dan bylsma or something LOL. Or Maybe he's just a fan.