My Little Girl - Comments

So, I am sorry... I mean you put this story in for my contest and I haven't judged it in almost a YEAR!!! It's so terrible and I am sorry. But i'll have the results by today or tomorrow. Promise =) I mean I will try and keep it anways xD I have homework i have to do tomorrow V_V

But anyways this story seems REALLY interested. The plot line is AWESOME and I like Zacky's ex best friend whom he had a daughter with is A ROYAL BITCH and not in the good sense.
Hope you continue on and I will have the results soon =)

I really like your story, it has a great plot. But there's something that's bothering me, you said in the beginning of the story that Breyten had diabetes, yet in later chapters you have her eating ice cream and fruit loops, those are full of sugar. That could send her into a diabetic reaction or a diabetic coma, I only bring this up because my dad had diabetes from the age 15 to age 36 when he died, and couldn't eat either of the two before mentioned items.

I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

i woulda kicked someones ass if i had a daughter or son and that happened to me. more soon? lolz

go zacky fight for you little girl. I love this story and seriously hate Erica she needs to go some place away from her. Can't wait to read more

UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love it!!! Update UBER soon!!!!

i love it so far! absolutely original and also very sweet! i can't wait to see what happens next. i asume there will probably be some more drama with erica and a custody battle. all very entertaining! *subscribes*

I like this. :)
Original-ness is nice, of course. :D
/Not a big fan of A7X/ xD
But, any ways - only thing I reccommend is more paragraphs. :)
Off to read chapter two!

I really like this alot... it is more original than most.
i normally dont start reading a story till theres maybe 20 chaps bc i hate waiting for updates.
but i do love this story. =)
update soon please!

awwww,hope everything goes alright for him,=) more soon? lolz

Very Original I love it!!

Omigosh! I thought Brayten was gunna be really really sick or something,
I love this stooory!

man, I about cried,um,im gonna make a banner for this story kuz im bored and I need sumthn 2 do,that's if it's alright with u,lolz.

what happened to me being in here???? Huh? Huh? I won't be your best friend until you do...

aww that was adorable she already has him wrapped around her finger.
can't wait to read more

awwww, I really like this story so far,lolz more soon?

Awwww! That's adorable.
I wish I could take online classes instead of goin to school...

aww yay amazing:D

<3Amanda

umm this is soo adorable!! love it!