May 15th, 2011 at 02:44am
My Little Girl - Comments
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I really like your story, it has a great plot. But there's something that's bothering me, you said in the beginning of the story that Breyten had diabetes, yet in later chapters you have her eating ice cream and fruit loops, those are full of sugar. That could send her into a diabetic reaction or a diabetic coma, I only bring this up because my dad had diabetes from the age 15 to age 36 when he died, and couldn't eat either of the two before mentioned items.December 5th, 2010 at 06:07am
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I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :DNovember 26th, 2010 at 01:05am
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i woulda kicked someones ass if i had a daughter or son and that happened to me. more soon? lolzSeptember 28th, 2010 at 05:00am
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go zacky fight for you little girl. I love this story and seriously hate Erica she needs to go some place away from her. Can't wait to read moreSeptember 28th, 2010 at 04:59am
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UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!September 8th, 2010 at 02:05am
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I love it!!! Update UBER soon!!!!July 9th, 2010 at 03:32am
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i love it so far! absolutely original and also very sweet! i can't wait to see what happens next. i asume there will probably be some more drama with erica and a custody battle. all very entertaining! *subscribes*July 6th, 2010 at 08:10pm
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I like this. :)
Original-ness is nice, of course. :D
/Not a big fan of A7X/ xD
But, any ways - only thing I reccommend is more paragraphs. :)
Off to read chapter two!July 5th, 2010 at 06:19am -
I really like this alot... it is more original than most.
i normally dont start reading a story till theres maybe 20 chaps bc i hate waiting for updates.
but i do love this story. =)
update soon please!July 2nd, 2010 at 07:56am -
awwww,hope everything goes alright for him,=) more soon? lolzJuly 2nd, 2010 at 01:46am
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Very Original I love it!!June 24th, 2010 at 08:24am
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Omigosh! I thought Brayten was gunna be really really sick or something,
I love this stooory!June 24th, 2010 at 12:21am -
man, I about cried,um,im gonna make a banner for this story kuz im bored and I need sumthn 2 do,that's if it's alright with u,lolz.June 23rd, 2010 at 11:10pm
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what happened to me being in here???? Huh? Huh? I won't be your best friend until you do...June 23rd, 2010 at 11:05pm
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aww that was adorable she already has him wrapped around her finger.
can't wait to read moreJune 23rd, 2010 at 10:41am -
awwww, I really like this story so far,lolz more soon?June 22nd, 2010 at 08:29am
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Awwww! That's adorable.
I wish I could take online classes instead of goin to school...June 22nd, 2010 at 06:05am -
aww yay amazing:D
<3AmandaJune 22nd, 2010 at 05:26am -
umm this is soo adorable!! love it!June 22nd, 2010 at 04:54am
But anyways this story seems REALLY interested. The plot line is AWESOME and I like Zacky's ex best friend whom he had a daughter with is A ROYAL BITCH and not in the good sense.
Hope you continue on and I will have the results soon =)