Unspoken Wishes - Comments

This was really interesting- I don't think I've read a story quite like this one before.

I loved your descriptions, and just the way you wrote the story. It really felt like I could feel how Chloe was feeling.

You did a really good job. :]

I absolutely LOVED it!
It felt so real!
I wish it was more chapters so I could find out what happens next(:

You need to write the next one! :)

Wow, this is amazing! I think you used the character description really well, it felt like I knew what Chloe was feeling, which is hard to do! Good Luck on the contest!