This was really cute. It showed the true reality of relationships between family, I loved how real it felt and how natural the conversation came. I thought this was well written and a wonderful read. :D
This was like the cutest thing ever. I liked that they are trying to fix their relationship and it was cute. I found no errors so thats good. I hate it when a phone wakes me up. Grrr :P
this wa really sweet. You can see how much the father and child miss eachother and want things to wrk out so they can see eachother. I LOVE "I'm Already There" by Lonestar. :]