I See It - Comments

Wow.
Thank Hathway up there for sharing this with me.
It was amazingly written, and heartbreakingly descriptive.
This was wonderful.
Amazing job, really.<3

You told me not to but I did. :P

And shush, it was amazing. Everyone else ain't got noffing on you!

But on a serious note, yeah;;
"A small hesitant smile pulled at her lips as the steadily shifting mass took a form in her eyes, imagination and heart.

"I see it.""

amazing! Really, the last part just concludes all the emotion that you put in it. And I love how you showed emotion and detail and told the story, but you made me crave to know more. Gah, bravo bravo.
:D

Wow, this is great. You really know how to write, and all the feelings & emotions could be felt while reading. It's definitely a break from the normal romance stories, as the other two have said.
It was all so descriptive, and yet it really makes you want to know more.
You did an awesome job!!
Thanks again for joining.
I will probably comment again after I have the rest of the entries in as well. :D

I really like this story. It's different and there isn't any of that pathetic romance stuff in it (:

I love this story.
From all I've read today there isn't any sappy romance, which I thank you.
It was real and heartbreaking. Showing the bonds we sometimes take as under tone.
I love your desriptions.

Greatstuffkayla.
:3