I Had So Much to Say and All You Did Was Walk Away - Comments

Ohmy. This is really good. Sad, but good. I like the way you write. It emphasizes on things that put an image into my mind easily. :]

This was awesome, it was like a little snap-shot into their lives, and you've captured it perfectly. The only thing I have to pick on is the title, it seems like it was taken almost straight from the song, only the tense was change kind of. (forgive me if it isn't.) I think this had an original title. Other than that, great work!

Aww this was sad =( I loved the last line though.

positive that I would never see it return.
That was pretty much my favorite line in the whole thing.
Sad, sad, sad.
You were able to capture the emotion really well, and that's one of the most important factors in good stories, for me.

This was really sad and what makes it worse? It happens all the time.
Your writing is fantastic, especially if you were able to almost make me cry.
<3

I liked the last paragraph. It really captured all the emotion and stuff, and the describing was good.
The whole thing was great. :D
It almost made me cry too. ;[
But I loved it. You're definitely winning this contest.
Or at least second, anyway, though you deserve first. :]

That really is sad, and it happens to so many girls all the time.

Aww, this was sad. This is sad because I'm pretty sure stuff like this happens everyday. :(
But this was really well written, and I like it.

I like it. You conveyed her emotions so clearly.