September 22nd, 2008 at 01:45pm
cnt wait for more
=D
Lust. - Comments
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March 18th, 2008 at 08:12pm
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aha :D
thank you two that's actually made my day
thanks loads :]
il try and update within the next couple of days :]
xxxMarch 18th, 2008 at 08:02pm -
I love it. I absolutely love it.
The way you put the little warning in at the beginning made me wonder what was going to happen in the story itself... until the end it felt like it actually was part of the story.
The first chapter was amazing, it really gives a feeling about the female character and the Darren character, the way this crush (if you can call it that) has turned into an obsession as if to say she was out of reach... which she obviously is.
It's fantastically different.
Well done and I'm definitely subscribing, So continue
Cause you've definitely got talent.March 18th, 2008 at 08:00pm -
Hmm, I like it. :).
'Tis a little different...
But isn't that what we're looking for.?
You should continue.
-xMarch 16th, 2008 at 06:12pm
I want to point out apart from "need" none of these chapters are personal, so I am sorry for any inaccurices or if it doesn't flow.