Rush - Comments

That was really, really, good!
The visual imagery was incredible, and it made me smile.
The layout was cute, *brownie points :B* and the picture was nice(:
The content of the story was almost inspiring, and something I could relate to- the rush of adrenaline when you do something to just feel...free, even for a little while.
It suited the topic- memories, really well and well done!
Thank you very,very much for joining the contest, and I wish you good luck(:
This was very well written and brought a smile to my face so I hope you understand that you are quiet a talented writer! (:

I'm especially fond of the last couple of lines. They remind me of the times my mom keeps telling me to do my work, and just keep trying, and I'll make it somehow.

It's not quite the same thing witht he work in all, but the slight rush you get off of something little and exciting, I can relate to that.

This is beautiful, awesome job!

First of all, ditto to what Cobain. said.
Second of all, this is the kind if thing that I'll do in the middle of the night once I can drive. (:

First of all, beautiful layout.
Second, amazing imagery. This is a really well done one-shot.