Oh my, Donnie Darko fanfiction! It's so hard to come across one of these, which is really unfortunate because that's my favorite movie. Anyway, you portrayed Donnie & Frank very well & I love the little aspects of the movie that were also thrown in, like Grandma Death, the amount of time in which the world will end & about Donnie Darko sounding like a superhero name. Those were all really great parts in the movie & I'm glad to see that you included them in this. Also, your writing style is really smooth & clean-cut, which just makes everything that much better. You did a great job!
Whoa, this is really amazing! I've never seen Donnie Darko, but my best friend has it and loves it, so maybe I'll watch it next time I visit her. All of your Jake oneshots make me want to watch his movies, so kudos for that =) I'd love to see like, a sequel to this one because I feel like you ended it on a cliffhanger. Not having seen the movie, I don't know what happens next.
Anyways, this is brilliantly written, and I'm looking forward to reading more of these.
This is awesome :) I never saw Donnie Darko, but I plan to, not just because I love Jake, but also because I love how you wrote it, and it made me super interested in seeing it :)
I like your attention to detail, and it flows nicely. I'm going to check out the prequel and sequel :D