Dreams of Someone - Comments

Dear authors, this is without doubt one of the best stories here. The memories each character held close to his heart and the feelings each character had for two lovers (one past and one present) brought the story to a whole new level. The flashbacks worked to your advantange as well as the flowy descriptions and the balance between description and dialogue. The characters were brought up nicely and I felt like I was in their shoes. I think if Rachael was in Jason's shoes when Sam came back, she would have done the same thing since she loved Ryan that much, even though she felt hurt because Sam came back out of nowhere and took Jason from her with his consent. The message Rachael sent to Sam, made me cry. I could relate to it easily and that's my past experience talking. Rachael should had tried with Ryan again but maybe it was her ego that didn't let her or fear for the same story repeating herself. I'm glad I found this undiscovered gem. For this heart-breaking story of yours you get 10/10pens.~Marian.

Dear authors, this is without doubt one of the best stories here. The memories each character held close to his heart and the feelings each character had for two lovers (one past and one present) brought the story to a whole new level. The flashbacks worked to your advantange as well as the flowy descriptions and the balance between description and dialogue. The characters were brought up nicely and I felt like I was in their shoes. I think if Rachael was in Jason's shoes when Sam came back, she would have done the same thing since she loved Ryan that much, even though she felt hurt because Sam came back out of nowhere and took Jason from her with his consent. The message Rachael sent to Sam, made me cry. I could relate to it easily and that's my past experience talking. Rachael should had tried with Ryan again but maybe it was her ego that didn't let her or fear for the same story repeating herself. I'm glad I found this undiscovered gem. For this heart-breaking story of yours you get 10/10pens.~Marian.

omg and the drama starts up again:( love the post can't wait for more!!! :)

i really like this story...they both had tradic losses with their loved ones and yet there together in the end!!! love the story can't wait till ypu post more!!!! :D

Wowowow.
I think this story is my new obsession.
I really loved it.

Me like :) Great idea, you need to finish your stories hoe!

I think this is a really good idea! You always have stories where it's just the one person trying to forget somone and not wanting to hurt who they are with at the moment blah blah blah, i think this is much more interesting
i always absolutely love your summary :)

GREAT update! I feel so bad for both Rachel and Jason, though... =( I'm still loving this though! I can't wait for the next update.

This sounds quite interesting...I wish to read more! I quite like it so far.