hey... i know that I've already commented once before, but I thought i'd go ahead and do it again so that you might update sooner!! please please I beg you! you have to continue!! it's one of the most original stories I've read so far!! please!
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO.
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THIS. IS. AMAZING. AND. TOTALLY. WORTH. CONTINUING.
I really, really, REALLY, (for some odd reason) liked how they were fighting. Most stories you'd see on here would be like really really shitty arguing, but this. This was like... really emotional. It touched on like, everything when you're really, really mad. Especially when he told her to break. I really like that part. Like, it seemed so real-life. REALLY real-life.
Ahhh. Calmed down.
Anyways. I love how their reactions to each other and everything they say to each other is so... "real-life". Not like, "OH MY GOD I'M DATING A ROCK STAR BUT OF COURRRRRRRRRRSE I DON'T CARE!"
When they crashed, I actually like yelled, "OH SHIT" out loud and freaked out by backing the computer chair into the couch behind me and flailing about... and my sister was like "WHAT THE FUCK". Cause then I was all freaking out and stuff.