Our Controversial Differences - Comments

It has an interesting concept. The plot line was established early on and you jumped right into it.

I think a nose dive was very appropriate for this story.

Nice job ^^

Pretty good. It was well written. However I think you added a bit too much of the lines to the song in it. That was a bit of a turn off for me. But other then that, I loved it.

I liked this one-shot. Very well thought out in terms of how it fits the song. There were only two mistakes that I caught:

"That's it!" James screamed, "I've had it with you and you're fucking ways!"

It should be ‘your’.

She scoffed at his remark. "Who is the one that is the high school drop-out and ten-thousand in dept? Not me, that's for sure."

I think you mean ‘debt’.
Your characterization was the key to making it work and it reflected your overall really good idea.

I loved this. Great grammar and good interpretation of the song. Very good job.