August 26th, 2010 at 03:25am
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Okay so first off, I didn't really enjoy the layout, the purple and blue contrast hurt my eyes. Go with lighter tones next time.
I liked how you made it seem she wasn't good enough for him, and how they switched from POV's so you got the real feel of each character. I wasn't the biggest fan of the 'happily ever after' cliche, but that's all good.
There were a few grammatical errors, that can be fixed if you just re-read it.
You have potential, and this could have been a great entry instead of just a good entry. Thank you for entering and winners should be posted soon, sorry about the long wait. Good Luck!