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OH SNAP THAT'S FUNNY!!!
cAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!

HAHA!
Edward in jail!
I betcha Bella's face will be priceless... xD

its amazing

Lol, Crev is hilarious when she's drunk! Anywho, I can't believe they got arrested! I actually like Eddy in this story, compared to usually, where I hate his guts. UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

haha XD great update! love the ken barbie story lol

Update soon please. :) I love your story and I wanna read some more.

“On your grandma?”
That line made my day.

Also, this story didn't show up in my email since chapter 10. I was wondering why you weren't updating, came to the story page, and found out you have been! Mibba fail :(

I love this :)Update soon?
(:

y oh y did he have to inprint on riley i mean she sounds so evil da way crev puts it but antywayz update soon plz oh and i hope u make sum new friends in utah!!!!! =)

Lol, ohh mann..he imprinted on her?!?
Sigh, I wonder how that's gonna turn out..
Well I hope you update again soon :) -xxx

Awesome.
Damn, poor Tawny.
cc:
<3

OH MY SHIT. He imprinted on a bitch! (Sorta rhymes xD)

You're now a Utah girl :D

Crev's language is...amusing amazing xD "Bitch, Whore, Slut..." Haha. Crev is tooo funny.

& you better get those 300 soon, I want you to update again already!

haha paul imprinted on riley

haha paul imprinted on riley

Love the update

i feel so bad for Paul...

i love it! ha! i think paul has no idea what he is in to

:( stupid riley

The bitch! I can't believe he imprinted on her! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please

Karma.
Thats what it is Karma.
If i was her i'd be cursing karma for doing that to me.

YAY! update!!
poor paul, he imprinted on a bitch...
sam thinks his pack is fucked up... lol
cant wait to read more update soon :D