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  • starbella

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    whoa an update?!?! Short but sweet. Hoping you will update again...
    February 6th, 2013 at 02:02am
  • Psychokitty13

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    so when is this going to be updated again?!?! Please?!?!?!?
    September 9th, 2012 at 02:29am
  • Marissa.Motionless

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    I'm in love. Subscribed!
    November 5th, 2011 at 04:56am
  • Starbabyekj

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    This story is amazing!
    October 24th, 2011 at 07:47pm
  • Alyx Khaos

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    I love this story!!!!!!!!
    October 2nd, 2011 at 05:03am
  • starbella

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    Im really super glad you updated, but I do think ( if you don't mind the good/bad advice) that you could but in more detail and ergo make chapters longer. Like for example when she got the vonka did she have to hide her hand from the bartender? Did she go to a bartender to get it in the first place?
    Have you ever gotton a tack or piece of glass in your foot? would your first reaction be to pull it out then punch someone in the face with the other hand? Would you have the guts to pull it out your self? Did the knife go through her hand all the way or just halfway? Wouldn't the blood get on the opponant (gena). What did the knife look like? How big was it? Was it a kitchen knife or a switch blade?
    Do you sorta of see what i'm trying to get at?

    Well no matter im still a dedicated subscriber :)
    October 2nd, 2011 at 04:35am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Haha Gena deserved it. I just hope she leaves her alone but somehow I feel like I should be doubting that she actually will. Update soon :)
    October 2nd, 2011 at 01:42am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Is Gena like stalking him now? What is this?
    Can't wait to see what happens next.
    September 14th, 2011 at 12:57am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    can't wait to see what happens next
    August 31st, 2011 at 06:14am
  • MaryJane_2013

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    woot woot!!!! more please
    August 25th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • Rachelish

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    This story is like the cocaine to my addiction!

    Absolutely love it! You write very well, or atleast your content makes up for any mistakes :P Please update soon!! i am excited to see what will happen
    June 4th, 2011 at 12:30pm
  • perfectionist326

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    Intense o.o
    June 4th, 2011 at 07:04am
  • Arie Vixen

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    I so cant wait to watch how this plays out!
    June 4th, 2011 at 01:47am
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    Hmm I wonder what the other slaves are planning? good chapter keep at em!
    June 3rd, 2011 at 06:39pm
  • RazzyVengeance6661

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    I really love this story :D keep it up
    June 1st, 2011 at 04:30pm
  • Arie Vixen

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    It was a great filler none the less hahaha.
    June 1st, 2011 at 12:56am
  • Emily99

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    Update soon please
    May 28th, 2011 at 03:44pm
  • Arie Vixen

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    I lobe how she had Gena down in seconds hahaha. I really wanna see how else there date goes.
    May 10th, 2011 at 11:35pm
  • perfectionist326

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    Short but cute :)
    May 10th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • Arie Vixen

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    Well I forgive you hahaha. I hope this date goes well and cant wait for more.
    May 9th, 2011 at 11:13pm
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