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  • killjoyceline

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    it was so beautiful
    i wish you wrote gerards reactions to the letter
    it was an amazing story!
    March 6th, 2011 at 10:01am
  • Daisy Chainsaw

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    I love this.
    July 30th, 2010 at 03:36am
  • yael-yello-djel

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    kind of sad :(
    I truly think this type of things happen and it needs to be stopped
    but wow, I love your kind of writing <3

    waarom praat ik in engels? weetikveel.
    supergoeie one-shot of whatever. erg goed.
    July 27th, 2010 at 06:17pm
  • coastofharry.

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    This was amazing.
    I'm used to the fluffy, smutty, 'i love you let's have sex' one shots.
    I enjoyed reading this because we just have to guess how Gererd feels after, also, KEEP IT UP (:
    June 29th, 2010 at 06:28am
  • theorychicken

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    Wow. This was...excellent. I really like the way you write this. It was a bit depressing, but it was done in a way that it wasn't overly-exaggerated.
    All-in-all, I loved this one-shot.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 12:07am
  • FluorescentChaos

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    Wow...honestly, just wow.
    That definitely wasn't your typical one-shot.
    And I can honestly say I very much enjoyed the change.
    Excellent work on that one!
    Hugz. <3
    June 22nd, 2010 at 10:19pm
  • Would You Kindly;

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    Well, that was sad... But very, very well-written! :D It kind of made me feel odd... Like I could feel Frankie's pain as he was writing that letter.

    And that song is my second favorite of all time by FOB. Which made it even better. :)

    Loved it; I just wanna give you a big, giant hug. xD
    June 22nd, 2010 at 07:08pm
  • Castiean

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    i really loved this,its just something about it
    did they really stop doing the kissin and etc...i nvr been to one of their concerts so i wouldnt know
    this is probably weird but it makes me happy to seec gee and frank do all those things together but anywho great story,i feel sorry for frankie :( all he wants is to be noticed by gerard
    June 22nd, 2010 at 06:35pm
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