Late Night Swim - Comments

I like the overall idea and the end is great, but in a few of the paragraphs you have so many sentences starting with "I" that it got really repetitive. You might want to reread it and add more varying word choice. Again, I like it, it was a pretty good story. :)

I am one of the judges for Clark Kent;;'s contest and I agree with her. You need to read through your stuff carefully so you can find those spelling errors. I found this story odd because she let the asshole kiss her but they were drunk so I guess it is okay. It was a really good story otherwise :).

Aww that was sweet, I think you interpreted the picture quite well and although I have seen this idea done quite a few times before I still really liked it.

You have really nice writing skill and everything flows well, but I did find quite a few spelling errors which effected your mark a little bit. But otherwise everything was really good.

Good work and good luck :)