Handsome Devil - Comments

Reading this brings me back to a time where I got very selective with my books! This storie deserves a platnum medal.

Okay, I mean seriously, Katelyn, I love you girl! You are one of the very few people who can leave me in tears of laughter! Every time I read any of your stories you always manage to absolutely amaze me! The analogies, the metaphors, the characters! They are all absolutely perfect! And not only that, but the emotions and dialogue... I just want to say, thank you. From reading your stories I've learned so much and I just...gah! I'm being all sappy now!

Anyways, I looooooooved this chapter. Your know why? Because it was amazing! Haha, my mom came in my room asking what in the world was wrong with me after the third laughing crisis. I seriously could not breathe!

On the far left was a tiny old spindly woman that looked like she’d died about five years ago.

This is one of my favorite lines in this chapter. It' brought me to tears... :'D

Tell me, what kind o’ guns are they havin’ ya and this Heath Ledger use?”
Ours.
On each other.

And that was maybe the icing on the cake. It was so unbelievably funny!!!

Well, the entire thing was hilarious, to say in the least. And I can't wait for the next one!

Oh my god! I am soooo scarred!! HAHA!! It's so bad that I pictured the entire thing! Ughhh...No dinner for me tonight. That is just so bad!!!
I LOVE IT!!! <3

OH MY GOD. I CAN'T EVEN - I WAS LAUGHING SO HARD THROUGHOUT THIS ENTIRE CHAPTER.
Fucking brilliant! :D

bahahah I was so excited to read this!! and I certainly enjoyed it. I can't wait to read the next chapter; I was laughing so hard at the analogies he uses!!

oh my goodness, this story is beautiful!
i've never read a gyllenhaal story like this before! i'm so hooked on it!
promise me you'll never stop writing this story!!!!
=D

Please, write more! I'm so eager to read the next chapter =]

and she's back!!! finally!! have missed your stories!

you got the gift girl, making people laugh -and I laughed, almost did "a grandma". No soldiers in my face tho. :D

amazing is the word.

:)

I love this story, it was hilarious, I couldn't stop laughing when I read about grandma's facial

Katelyn! You seriously have the ability to bring me to tears every time! I was laughing so hard I think I forgot how to breathe! The entire incident was absolutely priceless. I don't even know how you come up with these things. And your ability to get into his head is amazing! There isn't a sentence or even a word that deviates from the character you have created. And the best part is that I imagined Jake's personality entirely different from the way you portrayed him that now you have me wondering... This is my new obsession. xP

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Which is why the stewardess ended up shocking the hell out of me five minutes later when she nearly plowed the bathroom door down in the process of jumping on me.

I just had to quote this one sentence because that chick would totally be me if I saw Jake alone on a plane...or anywhere, for that matter.

Oh my God, Katelyn. You have no idea how hard I was laughing through this chapter. I'm so glad that you decided to have this be Jake instead of Seth Whatever-his-last-name-was. He's the complete opposite of how he is in the real world and how I make him out to be and I fucking love it. Jake as the sardonic asshole is pure gold and there are not enough words to describe how much I already love this story. It's fast on it's way to becoming my favorite and it's only the second chapter.

I would like to add that during the little role-play Mile High Club scene, I was laughing so hard I could not breathe. And then when I actually got enough oxygen, I started to laugh really really loud and my mom woke up.

Good job, Katelyn. :D

Katelyn. I seriously love this story with all of my heart. It's hilarious and amazing. And I just really, really love it. I was sitting on Mibba all day refreshing this page just to see if you had updated this yet and then you told me you did and I was all excited. Update soon[:

OMG!!!
AMAZING!!! Like I laughed out loud near the end. (I'm pretty sure you can guess where.) Like, picturing the whole thing in my head; Amazing!
I love the style of this story. How it's so raw and original. Like it's really someone writing down their thoughts without editing a word of it.
I really do love it. Keep it up! I want more! <3
Oh! Thanks for the shoutout! haha!

As always your ideas are absolutely brilliant! I love that you chose Jake because I absolutely adore that man! Plus the flow of your writing is so amazing I get sucked in from the very beginning. It's entirely believable and just...creative! I love it and i can't wait to read more! :]

This is fucking amazing.

Dang it! I wanted to be the first comment! This is what I get for falling asleep. :(

As I told you before, I absolutely love this and thinks it's genius. I CANNOT wait for you to post more!

Subscribed, lovely.

I am loving this. It's really interesting. Haha! Can't wait to read some more! ^.^