hey don't worry about the length of the chapters, make them the length you feel comfortable with and if you got your point across and what you wanted to do with it, make it short-ish or longer, if you want to! :)
I love Malkin stories. I love to hear him talk and imagining him talking cracks me up. Anyways, the day of teh funeral seriously made me tear up. I can't wait for the next update :)