Deserved to be Alive - Comments

  • urbanfan4ever

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    Awe, I seriously love how you write Geno. No one ever gets it right. They always have him speaking perfect English.
    July 6th, 2010 at 08:39pm
  • dreamerforever

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    ^I agree. He better not mess this up.
    July 6th, 2010 at 02:37am
  • lauren;

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    she and geno should stay together. they better stay together.
    July 5th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • A1407719

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    Yeah I hope they work out.
    Can't wait for more! Soon?
    July 4th, 2010 at 06:15pm
  • lauren;

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    awe, that was so cute (:
    July 3rd, 2010 at 05:32pm
  • dreamerforever

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    Aww...he loves her. Go back to him!
    July 3rd, 2010 at 03:43am
  • dreamerforever

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    I just found this. I love it!!
    June 29th, 2010 at 02:32am
  • lauren;

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    she and geno just need to get together. like, now.
    June 29th, 2010 at 01:02am
  • lauren;

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    awe, poor adele :(
    June 28th, 2010 at 07:39pm
  • MissLis

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    hey don't worry about the length of the chapters, make them the length you feel comfortable with and if you got your point across and what you wanted to do with it, make it short-ish or longer, if you want to! :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 08:13pm
  • Lotus.Moon

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    Evgeni is a jerk, I kinda want her to be with Sid!

    Oh, chapters 4 and 5 are the same chapter, but the others are great!
    June 27th, 2010 at 07:56pm
  • A1407719

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    K this is like the 6th comment on this chapter
    I'm glad evgeni feels bad about hurting her.
    More soon?! Again I can't wait!
    June 27th, 2010 at 10:51am
  • lauren;

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    geno should not be with oksana. make him be with adele (:
    June 27th, 2010 at 08:08am
  • MaybeitsBee

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    I like it [:
    Sad start, but I'm loving what's it become so far :D
    June 27th, 2010 at 07:33am
  • beej672

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    I love Malkin stories. I love to hear him talk and imagining him talking cracks me up.
    Anyways, the day of teh funeral seriously made me tear up.
    I can't wait for the next update :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 07:01am
  • Chickydee6

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    I was tempted not to comment because I hate when people ask for comments.
    Anywho - I like this story. It's not Oshie :P, but I like it. :)
    June 27th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • vivre.rire.l'amour!

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    This is a great story!
    It literally made me cry when I read Adele's speech!
    I want to know what happens!
    Update soon!
    June 27th, 2010 at 06:29am
  • A1407719

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    Ugh oh...
    Really want to know what happens next.I can't believe geno is playing her like that too.
    More soon?!
    June 26th, 2010 at 11:26pm
  • urbanfan4ever

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    Awe, so sad. You do know you have chapter 4 up twice though, right?
    June 26th, 2010 at 03:12am
  • urbanfan4ever

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    Love it, keep it up!
    June 25th, 2010 at 11:49pm