This did have a slow start, but it seems like it might be interesting. It was rather well written and the descriptions were good. From the description it sounded a little cliche to me, but hopefully you'll have some interesting twists in there. Anyways, good job. (:
So far I like it. I really do. The descriptions seem really good. And overall it seems to be really well written. I found that it did have a bit of a slow start though but it does have a lot of potiental. Hopefully in the next couple of chapters it'll get more interesting. =D
June 22nd, 2010 at 08:15pm
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