Turn Right... - Comments

Aw that was a really sweet chapter! I loved it! <3

You know, shooting off a warning to me BEFORE I am reading this would have been appreciated, ya know? I mean...sitting on the sofa next to Steve and then THIS steamy ZV stuff...YOU HAVE TO BE DOING THIS ON PURPOSE WOMAN!
I am loving this update, most likely because it explains so much as to where Zack's feelings were back then, how he distanced himself even further from Gena(her her from him) and how fond his memories were of her.
He's adorable with his son, and I am certain that Peyton knows that he's his dad. Kids' intuition is amazing, it might take him a while to say it out loud, but I am certain at this stage.

...yeahhh, I ain't even gonna say anything about that steamy make-out session apart from this: IT IS YOUR DAMN FAULT I AM FALLING FOR THIS FOOL ALL OVER AGAIN!!! Gah!!!! How could you stop it there, we both know wine is a woman's weakness when it comes to feeling rather horny...they should have been rolling through the sheets, or sand, or...mmmhhhh!

Update soon!!!!!

Loved both of the updates!
Really loved their moment together on the deck!
Looking forward to more!

DAMN.
that's all that im saying.
loved your chapters, sis.
thank you for updating.
THE BEAST!!! oh my god, who can resist him? XDDD

Zacky better watch himself if he's gonna be yelling at Taryn like that, Paige is gonna have to kick his ass. jus' sayin. im sure she can throw a good punch or two if she really wanted too. or a slap. one slap can work too ;P

oooh, a little fire at the end of the update. yummy, yummy. :PPP

love you <3

BAHAHAHA.
oh, the beast is a dirty, dirty man. ;P but, he wouldnt be the beast if he wasnt. but Paiges SISTER is a dirty woman! doing that to poor Zacky. he's gonna have a fit.
IM SO FREAKIN EXCITED to see how this BBQ goes!

Peyton. awee. Unca. i love it.

looking forward to this next chapter. it should be interesting, if i do say so myself.
:DDD

amazing work, amazingggg work :D
<3

lovelovelovelovelooooooooove this story!!! Matt is such a good uncle, and I know he loooves Peyton, but give the poor man his morning sex back lol. Hahaha Zack is gonna have a fucking heart attack if Brian keeps creeping on his girl. More soon? Pleeeease? Preeeetttty pleeeease??? *subscribes*

I loved Zacky's reaction! Great update, looking forward to more!

Speaking of your other epic, is an update in the works for that as well? I need to see what Jimmy is up to, lol!

I wondered what Taryn had up her sleeve for Gates and it makes some sense what he did. I do wonder if pissing Zachy off was right, but if it makes him see sense, then I'm okay with it. I'm intersted to see just how Zach persues her!

Zacky's reaction was what i expected of him, well, it surprised me a little bit, because he can be hotheaded, but i dont think he'd get like that with a lady, which is a good thing.

i like this chapter alot, AND THE BEAST!!!
i woulda went home with him ;) BAHAHA. but i kinda understand why she went with Zacky,
although, if he's going to be an asshole, he can fuck off!! >:| buttt, Paige isn't being the most compliant of people either. :/ it's understandable, but i just want her to allow herself to be happy and content with Zacky wanting to be a part of her life and wanting to be involved with Peyton.
she's lucky he wants to be invovled.

i loved the dinner with the a7x, matt's antics while they were all outside LOL!

oooooo, they kissed! O:
i hope Paige doesnt have to cry anymore, it makes me sad to see her upset like that. :(
<3

Loved the update. So glad Zacky wants to be involved!
Can't wait for him to properly meet Peyton!

Dude, Van Atlas Moving Lines, my dad used to work for them. :)

Good chapter. Glad she told Zacky, though I’m a little weary about his reaction.

I can't wait to see what Zacky's reaction is!
Hopefully he doesn't run away and avoid her!
Looking forward to more!

A CLIFFHANGER?!?!?
are you TRYING to kill meeee?
what the helllllll!! D:
i cant wait to see what happens, damn it. DAMN IT ALL. i wish this was a movie, so i could just watch it!!
you have me hooked woman. but you've had me hooked since you started this.

Geez oh petes i can't friggin WAIT. this is insaneeeeee.

i love the end of this chapter, Jimmy, oh, Jimmy <3.
maybe THE BEAST will be in the next chapter, eh?? XD
but oh dammmmmnnn. she told him! O:
O: O: O:

once again, DAMN CLIFFHANGERS!! <see i'm freakin out right now, man FREAKIN OUT!! D:
XD
i love you. and i hope you still love me after this crazy comment XD

*If* Zach is the adult I've pegged him for, he'll be able to handle this with grace and dignity. If not, then he's naught but a spoiled brat and doesn't deserve her. But I'm praying he's more the former than the latter.

sooo, re-reading once again, seeing as im slightly a little hung over and couldn't think of anything I'd rather to do then read this amazingly wonderful story before i go and take a nap,
and i've decided,

chapter 2 is one of my favorites for obvious reasons ;)
but i also love chapter 6 because of Taryn and Pagie re-uniting with one another, and her getting out of that hell hole.
but i love chapter 8 because i love Peyton interacting with Matthew, i cant wait to see how he and Zacky end up <3 it's gonna be amazing, i just know :P

damn it, all of the chapters are amazing!!!

love you my sista from another mista. <3

Loved that update!
I'm so glad Peyton is talking and is a little more comfortable around them!
Can't wait for the next one!

“There’s nothing wrong with my face, asshole.”
I LOVE THAT.

and i love matt even though he's down right fucking crazy as hell. Peyton seems to like him too. but i just hope he doesnt get too close to matt and not want to have anything to do with his father *cough* ZACHARY *cough*, but i love how Matt is with Pey. i love that he's determined to help Paige and Pey no matter what.

and of couse, Paige will always love Tar. that's no question at all.

BRIAN! the BEAST was in this chapter. ahh, that man. XD
and i hope to see more of ZV coming soon! ;P

just wanted to stop by and tell you im re-reading this...
YET AGAIN.
mwahahahaa.
:P

Aw I'm so glad they got all that stuff for them!
Great update, can't wait for the next one!

I hope she eventually realizes what she has in Cali =). It's all very overwhelming at first, but it's so worth it in the end. Im glad they are helping her and she deservers it all!