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  • wendy darling

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    D'aww.
    Jack such a gentleman.
    tehe
    June 25th, 2010 at 05:54pm
  • wendy darling

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    Your descriptive writing is so amazing.
    Cheese
    I'm totally jealous over here.
    June 24th, 2010 at 07:27am
  • wendy darling

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    This chapter was great!
    I loved this line:
    But he loved his little bird and if clipping her wings kept her grounded then so be it.
    It was very interesting. Can't wait to see who this Jo is.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 06:51am
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    This is great!
    :D
    June 23rd, 2010 at 06:45am
  • wendy darling

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    Oh, this is interesting.
    I can't wait to see where you're going to take this one.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 06:06am
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