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  • luminos.

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    I loved it!
    I love the way it was written describing the other person as "you".
    Very good!
    August 15th, 2010 at 06:04am
  • PACE_girl

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    Oh my god. That was beautiful. You don't think you gave it justice? Honey, you gave it far beyond the justice it deserves. That was poetic up until the very end. I honestly have no criticism for you. Your pacing was excellent, your word choice, your concept, the use of repetition and parallel structure. God! It was all so amazing. Thank you for giving me this treat.
    June 23rd, 2010 at 07:56pm
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