It Was a Small Problem - Comments

Your summary is spot on; perfectly balanced and descriptive. I'm already intrigued.

I felt like Hayley's first line was a bit forced, but the further I read into the beginning, the more real it all became. The little gestures described are so human and genuine. The speech became more natural too. It's very clever actually.

I like how the problems and insecurities in their relationship are expressed too. It's not just simple "you'll find someone else," it's about loving someone so much and worrying you'll lose them, but being able to compromise so neither one of them have to give up on their passion, and still love each other. It's beautiful really. Some of the lines are a bit too cheesy for me, but then again, I've never been in a relationship with another woman so I can't say I understand the dynamics too well there. I could just be running my mouth

It's all so adorable actually. Really cute. Fluffy and all, but cute. And the ending was quite funny. The banter between the guys was great.

Good luck in the contest!

Amazing :D I loved it. And I saying that this was the... Second? Femmeslash I've ever read. I think because of this I may read more.

It was well written and down right addorable at parts.

I loved this C:

This is a truly amazing story. Thank you for writing it. It has inspired me.
Great job! I think I'll go check out your other stories =D

This was really good :)

I usually don't read femmeslash but this one was amazing. I am a huge Hey Monday and Paramore fan so this was fun to read.

WHY HELLO THERE

I'VE BEEN A SILENT READERS OF YOURS FOR A LONG TIME AND I NEED TO SAY, THIS STORY REALLY REALLY INSPIRED ME TO COMMENT. =D

It was such a great story, and I have to say, I love PARAMORE. I love how a lot of your stories have Paramore in them and THAT BANNER IS ROCKING.

This was my first time reading a girl with girl story and thanks for making it so memorable!!!!!!!! You have shown to be that love is so beautiful.

Keep on rocking and writing. I will now comment more due to your amazing awesomeness

(PASSES YOU A DOZEN CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES)

Oh honey, I'm sorry I haven't stopped by lately to check out your stories and boy do I regret it. This was just so amazing and pretty for words that I'm still awestruck at the raw beauty of it.

You have such a way with words and scenerios and I love the romantic stuff you dish out. Keep it coming. You have me addicted. ;)

And I need to say this. THE BANNER IS AMAZING. I LOVE THE POSES THEY DO AND I'M SO JEALOUS OF YOU NOW. YOUR WRITING SKILLS AND YOUR ARTISTIC SKILLS.

But back to the story, I love it to pieces and I love YOU to pieces too for writing it. You're a damn good writer and you know how to incorporate humor into your stories.

Do more slash stories next time please! :D

Your writing is like a drug!

WHY THE HECK DIDN'T YOU TELL ME ABOUT THIS??? YOU KNOW I LOVE BLOODY FEMMESLASH FANFICTION!

Mkay, this was great.
I loved it. But you got one tiny detail wrong.

ZAC IS THE FOOD OBSESSED ONE, not Joshy boy.
Josh likes food, but not as much as Zac does. Zac shoulda been the one tackling Taylor. :)

I am honestly lacking in words for this piece. It was wonderfully written, and I am in love with the pairing, if you didn't already know. XD Hayley and Cassadee have a perfect relationship that was almost chopped over something so simply solved. I loved that you put in the bit about them loving what they do and that it would be hard if they quit over something so little like being afraid they'd lose the other, even though they both should know that would never happen. I'm so so so glad you entered this, and you used those lyrics perfectly. You couldn't have gotten anything better out of them than this. I am so proud to call you and entrant! Seriously. You always make me so excited when you enter in my contests. I think Paramore is your lucky contest subject. :)

You don't write fanfiction often because you think you won't portray the famous celebrities right? Who cares! You're a wonderful writer and people shouldn't give a damn. No one knows what they're really like anyway. :) Write what you want to write. This was truly amazing.

Ah. Don't feel bad, this is a gorgeous piece of work.

Hard to believe that was 13 pages, LOL. But no seriously, I applaud this piece, especially because it's a relationship between two females. XD

GAYS ARE SO COOL!

Beautifully written and just so heart wrenching at times. I love the comic relief that you put in there, and the ending was just so CORNY. ;)

The song was beautiful and the moments were beautiful. I especially liked how you started off the story with there already being a conflict, and the strike through the girlfriend. That was very enjoyable for some reason. XD

It's like Inspiration took over and just wrote it for you. I hope you win first place. This fanfiction truly deserves it. :3