Erika, I beg you, please do not ever have Gerard say "fuck yourself with my cock baby brother" because picturing Gerard and Mikey having sex and Gerard saying "baby brother" during it is really creepy. Really creepy.
... I complete forgot what I was going to say.... -hum's I Got Birds In My Ears And A Devil On My Shoulder- ... I still can't remember. Oh! Gerard's dirty talk is hot, just don't have him say baby brother or I'll chew your ass out. YOU NEVER GO ASS TO MOUTH!
Wow, this is gonna be a long comment... not really. Anyways, glad you updated. It was about damn time. Update sooner. Yup.
EDIT;HOYEAH! I started a new page. XD ANYWAYS! I shall call it .... Openupyourthighsandshowmethesurprise. XD
I'm sorry I'm so bad at updating
Enjoy!