It's really Complicated. - Comments

This is a good one as well :) Cute (yet probably insane) guy kidnaps a pretty girl, acts like her boyfriend, and now TROUBLE!!!!

I like the plot, and I hope to see an update soon! :)

Love it! Please update soon!

awesome storiiiiiie!!!!!!!!!!!!
Update soon please. ;)
=)

lawlz
well that was awesome
i love maceys
and im pretty sure that they dont allow guys into the girls changing rooms but whatver
lawlz
:D

Okay, I really love the plot for this story and everything and the characters. So, I'm subscribing.
But, I do have some constructive critisism.

I think you should make longer more descriptive chapters. And, since you aren't making Ember a "scared, innoncent, whiny" girl, I think you should make her have more common sense. I mean when her and Lucas were at her house it didn't say anything about how maybe she should "fear for her mother's life or something because this was the guy that put a gun to my back not even a half hour ago."

Also, you have some spelling mistakes. So, I think you should always read through what you have written to double check, just in case.

Sorry if I may sound a little harsh and all, but I really like the story and I'm just trying to help you make it better.

:DDDDD
Hope it helps!
:DDDDD

OAO
things are getting hot!!
XD
ahahahahahah
lawlz
:D
update soon!!
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wow, I lovee this so far!
i mean, i kinda felt like the chick should be more scared than she was but besides that its awesome, cant wait for the rest!

i still dont get it!!
and augh!!
what did he mean at the end of the last chapter?
and what is going on here?
@-@
im confuzzled
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I loved the latest chapter! Please update soon! :D

wooo!!
you updated!!
yay!!
XD
haha
lawlz
lucas is kinda weird though
he was all like im not the bad guy i was doing it for your own safety
:P
bullshit!!
lawlz
XD
anyways, update soon!!!
that way i'll know what he means!!
please?
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I really like it (: I'd like it if you updated cuz I'm hooked on this!

I really like this so far, it seems really original!update soon please!! :)

it sounds good so far. please updat soon! :D :D :D :D :D :D