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  • CountryGirl712

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    I am not a huge fan of sports stories so I didn't read the whole thing. However, I love your writing style and the way you set out the story with breaks between every few sentences. It made it much easier to read and I loved it!
    October 13th, 2014 at 11:08pm
  • punkrockhockeymarvel

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    This is the first tennis related story I've read and I really love it :) I'm just really interested to see where you're going to take it.

    Hope you continue with it!
    January 9th, 2014 at 06:47am
  • hale.

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    Don't even care you probably haven't updated it ages (I think sush if I'm wrong) I love it though. I hope you continue. Just got my tennis obsession the last few weeks because of the Australian open. So good haha
    January 21st, 2013 at 12:24pm
  • keepthefaithxoxo

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    I like this story, it's very interesting. I like seeing the side of an athlete that no one really sees, nor understands. It has a certain edge to it, and it's very well written. The details and descriptions are wonderfully done, and it’s as if I’m sitting there in the stands watching all of this. Good work!
    September 4th, 2012 at 03:52am
  • amywentz;

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    YAY! You updated! I thought this one was lost forever I must admit. I'm so glad you're writing again! :D EEEEE. And ANDY, I KNOW :'( Terrrrrrrible loss!:(
    September 1st, 2012 at 01:44pm
  • hiwagang hapis

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    I absolutely hope you'll continue updating this. I'm really disappointed that you haven't updated, actually.
    August 29th, 2012 at 01:11pm
  • jamie092

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    Please update again soon...loved it xx
    July 29th, 2012 at 10:44am
  • Deadlihood

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    I’m not going to pretend I have any knowledge of tennis (aside from hitting a ball with a racket) but I like this story idea you have. The description of the nightmare is very vivid and well, like a nightmare is when you’re having one: devastatingly real.
    June 20th, 2012 at 04:27am
  • DramaGeek95

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    I just found this story and I love it! However, chapter 6 seems to be from your Prince Harry fic. Maybe you accidentally uploaded it here? Update soon please!
    June 10th, 2012 at 05:41am
  • amywentz;

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    YOU UPDATED! Omg! Haha
    It's been a whole year! And I'll have you know I did come back to double check I hadn't missed an update email every now and then haha
    I love this fic, I do hope you'll write it more often :)
    But I didn't know you had a prince Harry fic! I'm goin to go lurk it now :D
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:37pm
  • Yakitori

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    Yay an update! I'm really excited to see where youtake the characters in this story. Please update soon!
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:06am
  • hiwagang hapis

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    I agree with all of them. This is an amazing story and I would love it if you updated.

    Though I don't play tennis anymore, I still know some international players :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:18am
  • OldTimeWriter

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    this is an amazing story! :DD Pls continue??
    May 16th, 2012 at 06:16pm
  • neutral4never

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    I really like this story! It's definitely got my interest, alright. Keep uploading when you can, I'd love to see it have an ending.
    July 17th, 2011 at 11:55pm
  • Yakitori

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    I'm really liking this story! I've been in love with Djokovic since seeing him parody Shakira. Please update soon!
    July 8th, 2011 at 11:55am
  • amywentz;

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    Damn that girlfriend! Aha is she going to make an appearance? I actually think she's very pretty haha. I liked the interaction in this one too, it was an original first meeting - not something you typically expect :)
    May 25th, 2011 at 12:14pm
  • amywentz;

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    Heyyyy :) it was what was waiting in my inbox! :D I spent my 15 minute break at work with this beautiful chapter :) you made my day completely - I'll be in daydream land while serving people for the next few hours til close haha
    January 30th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • neutral4never

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    Wow! I think you're the first person to write a Navak Djokovic fanfic on Mibba! Congrats! I haven't read it yet, but I'm sure it'll be awesome. I can't believe I've been looking all this time.... YAY!
    January 30th, 2011 at 01:38am
  • amywentz;

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    Oh my god. You are my favourite person in the world ever! You have to write more, like now haha I've been looking for a novak story for a million years. This is amazing so far :) If I could, I would pay you.
    January 26th, 2011 at 01:05pm
  • tanev

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    I'm sorry I couldn't get back to you until now, as I just got back from vacation recently.

    Anyway, I love your depiction of Casey's love for Novak; her childish crush-like feelings make me giggle all over the place. Also, I'm glad you're not rushing them into a relationship. It's something that rather frustrates me and I've seen this tactic a lot in fan fiction.
    There's not much wrong with your grammar, except for an incorrect usage of too and a couple of comma splices (but really, who cares about comma splices?)
    I hope you can find time to update soon!
    August 23rd, 2010 at 04:21am