i like how Zeke is taller than Marshall, too. and i also like, how you did the...y'know scene. how you, actually, didn't even do one. for some reason, i like those, as weird as that probably seems. i'm so happy you updated, it was most definitely worth the wait. (:
And seriously, I've been waiting for another chapter so long I don't know where to start ó_ò It was awesome, perfect, everything I thought and not thought it would be and you're such an amazing writer, don't ever stop writing again, ok? *catches breath*
Oh gosh, you updated! This makes me very happy! I've missed you and your writing, so welcome back!
I'm kind of too jittery to leave a detailed comment, so all I really have to say is that Zeke is cuter than kittens and I would really like to keep him. I will be expecting him via mail in the next two weeks, please and thank you.
That was really, really cute. I love how Finn and Marshall are both all, "Shut up Zeke, and enjoy your fucking birthday." That's super cute. I love that Zeke is so happy now. Please, please update soon? This is probably my favorite story that I'm reading right now. I can't believe I didn't see the update notification. Thank you for the update, as they always make me a happy person(:
How the fuck did I miss that this was updated? -.- Meh. But you should know that I think they're absolutely precious. Especially Marshall. <33 I really can't stress to you how much I love this. And don't worry about being 'slow'. I know I've got a fuck ton of things going on, and I'm not pumping out adorable fictional characters for people to love on. :3
But really, this is great, and I can't wait for more.
It's okay that it's slow, I'm not going to bitch, cause I'm slow too. It was a really wonderful chapter though. I wonder what's going to happen next. *wink wink.*