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  • FallenCreature

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    Hmm... interesting. Meh, it' s cute! c;
    December 26th, 2012 at 01:43am
  • spencer hastings.

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    The layout is totally awesome. Jake is amazing. And I have yet to find another fanfiction about him on Mibba. This is the first one. And it's amazing.

    I like the way that you depicted your characters. And how different Jake is on the inside than how he seems in the first chapter. I would have thought of him as some really scary person. But he's just a lovable kid in the second chapter. It's so cute! I just want to cuddle with him.

    I can't wait to see where this story is going. Update soon!
    June 7th, 2011 at 04:33pm
  • ptvjaime

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    You.
    Are.
    Christ.
    O.O
    April 29th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • OutInTheCold

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    oki this is SO damn cute u just HAVE to update D: OKI!? x)
    srly, update :3<3
    April 21st, 2011 at 03:02pm
  • CheckingOutDanFlint

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    This is cute, and lovely and just...awh xD
    Hope you update soon!
    April 21st, 2011 at 01:12am
  • No Tomorrow

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    love this! Can't wait to see what happens next =]
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:21pm
  • DistortedGrey

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    It caught my eye, i want to know more. xD
    March 3rd, 2011 at 02:56pm
  • Faded Hues of Glory

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    FIRST COMMENT
    Even though there's not chapters...
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    ANYWHO.
    This looks interesting.
    POST SOON :D
    June 28th, 2010 at 03:04am
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