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  • MyDayWasSwell

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    I liked this a lot. It's nice that it didn't get cheesy which was very possible.

    I think it could be really interesting if you did a follow up on it and saw where the two went from there.
    July 16th, 2010 at 02:56am
  • paranoid android.

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    I quite enjoyed that. You portrayed the gradual affection very well, and some of the lines were really relatable.

    "It was her smile; a smile reserved especially for her."
    June 28th, 2010 at 08:10pm
  • WaitingForAnEnd

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    Loved reading this story! It was so cute espeically the rain part. I would subscribe but it's a short story.
    June 25th, 2010 at 03:37am
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