21 Guys, 1 Girl - Comments

I think the ending was a little rushed,
but that's okay.
I'm kinda sad that it's already over. )/

awwwwww! this was really great! too bad it's over!

Nash is a ass!!!
Another amazing update
Btw (:..hope more comes
Soon!!

Nash is an ass.
Haha ; that rhymed. XD

i knew there was a reason i liked eli. lol. more soon plz!

Awwww eli and her r soooo cute!!!! Update very soon :)

aw snap! lol. these things are waay cooler when you have a front row seat, and waay scarier when they're abuot you. love this!

AWH!
Eli likes her!
;D

I love this story!!!! Please keep updating its getting really good!!

this is turning out to be a really good story!!!!! Keep writing!!! Your a good writer!!!

Omg!!! I can't believe it was dream.... I thought it was foreal :/!!!! Another amazing update ...keep them coming :)

holy shiznix!
It was a dream?!?!
damn ; that sucks ballsacks.
-excuse my language- :/
anyways!-
bahahahah I wonder when it shall happen forreal?!
>:D

really in love with Eli... i have a thing for jerks. not sure why. i really love this! can't wait for more!

Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeee cute layout! :3 I tried asking in the most un-bitchy way, 'cause I didn't want you to think that I was telling you what to do, but I love the result :)

But the most important part, the story: Urgh! I've always been a sucker for love/hate relationships, so I'd vote for Eli *makes herself tiny* BUT! She can't completely ignore Nash. He's been so sweet!
It's clear she's hot for Eli though. I love the way you don't have her immediately melting in his arms, she still keeps her attitude :P but DAMN, if she dreams that after a single kiss, I wanna see where this goes! ;D

Amazing update!!! Eli is such a jerk sometimes.....but I LOVE him! Hope another update comes really soon :)

I love this. :)

I got all excited when I saw you had updated. I knew this was going to be a big chapter when I saw the title. 'The Kiss'. How could I not read?
So Eli acts like an asshole when everyone's around, but is more than willing to get close to her when they're alone together. Hmm, sounds like a bad idea for her :/

You know what would be cool though? An original layout :) You don't have to, but it would, y'know, be more attractive to new readers.

All in all, good job! Loved the update, and I can't wait for more! :D

I just started reading ur story n I love it soo far ..... I hope an update comes really soon :)!!

=O So Warrenville isn't just a dick. He's a JEALOUS dick. Ok, makes more sense :P
Aww, Nash is just adorable, I'd gobble him up :3

Can't wait to see the next practice, see what it looks like.

Dicks. I like the way she reacted to thier intimidations though. You try to trip me? I'll just avoid it and make you look like an idiot.
At least she's not completely alone. One teammate and one veeeeery influencing coach.
I don't like the captain already. If I were her, I'd 'accidently' step on his foot or something. While wearing my skates.
...Okay not really. But imagination helps! :D

I like the fact that this is a good hockey story, but not a fanfiction. It's nice to get away from all the NHL storiesé

Haha, no problemo :P Aren't comments fun to receive?