Through the Looking Glass - Comments

AH! Creepy, sweet pillow talk! That's when I leave. lol. But, I would want to hit him, too, if he was being that over protective. Fuck, I'd probably try to shoot him. As much as I hate cocky Brian, I think Girly Brian is ten times worse... and far more creepy. XD

I'm all for learning about torture devices but a Judas Chair... eww. Just like a fucking Spanish Donkey. No thank you. That's fucked up, even for me. I would had been freaked out if I were in her place with all of that. That's fucking weird. DX

With my somewhat-knowledge of torture devices, I want no where near the Judas Chair lol.

And I really liked Brian in this. He was almost sweet. I just liked this chapter. It showed that while we all may be tough or whatever, we all have our weaker moments.

More soon :P

Yeah, I agree with Scratch. I don't think Stanley is all that great of an assassin either. I mean, he can't find Syn while Syn is chasing after the girls at bars and shit? It's not like he's been hiding. What a fucking disgrace but I don't think this is going to work in her favor. He is sloppy which means that he's going to be sloppy with whatever he is planning for her and since we've already talked about this... You understand, demon. lol.

Honestly, I want to know what's behind the curtain. I wanted to know the moment it was mentioned and if I was in her situation, I would check. I imagine because he is sloppy as shit, that might be where he keeps his... instruments. Maybe she can play a little bit of music. :D

Fucking Stanley...he's a failure of an assassin, with that name and being such a fat ass lol. The only thing I would be afraid of would be if he threatened to sit on me. Then I would cry and scream and want to die. Because he probably also smells lol.

I'm in a mean mood tonight lol.

Soooo, you need to update this like...yesterday lol. That's how soon you need to update it. Because I will be personally hurt and sad if you don't haha. And you don't want me hurt and sad; I get moody lol.

You know, it's his fault that she took off so he had no one to blame but himself though I imagine that he will try and blame someone else. And I think that it's a bit funny and sad that her last thoughts while being hit over the head with something was that Brian was going to say something stupid about it. Fucking Brian...

Oh Brian and his massive fucking ego; it fits far too well lol. I mean could you imagine a self-conscious, insecure Brian? No, no you cannot lol.

And oh shit, he's never going to let this go haha.

I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter :)

Oh. And Jesus, could he get anymore weird with the hairspray shit? He's more anal about his hair than most women. It's almost scary. Such a girl. lol.

Ya know, as much as I love a good fight and going balls out, sometimes there's a certain thrill to being chased. I'm not saying that I would like to do it all the time because I'm a bit of a control freak and a brute but the adrenaline from being chased is nice sometimes. I'm just sayin'...

I don't know why but Johnny trying to be all smooth about the shots made me giggle. XD And I was totally hiding my computer screen as soon as they got to her house haha.

Brian and his fucking hairspray lol.

I loved it as usual. More as soon as you can :)

I've never understood why girls have to go to the bathroom in packs. It's unnatural to me. Like, "Do you want me to wipe your ass when you're done?" Don't ask that though, you get weird ass looks and still get drug off to the bathroom. lol.

I don't like how Brian always knows where she is and that he feels the need to follow her. Me, big man... you, small woman. Not cool, Brian. Not cool. It just pisses me off. She can take care of herself, specially when the girls there as back up. He needs to be punched.

XD "She's gone to find Skye, Jimbo's girl. Rumor has it, she fell into a paint bucket."

I wonder if people worry about this in real life as well, with as much as I'm MIA lol.

I really liked it, needless to say, and can't wait for the second part of it :)

Fucking finally! You updated! llol.

I don't know. I would be a bit worried but then again I woundn't. She's surrounded by professional killers and it seems like they are all attached to her in some form or another meaning they would protect her. Having your life threatened is aways scary but in just the time she's known all of them, it seems like a natural happening. It comes with the life even though she's tried to distance herself from it. Catch 22, you will. And when there is a Catch 22, the best way to deal with it is an actual .22. XD

It wasn't shitty and I have put my violent thoughts aside since you updated so, that shpuld mean something. lol.

Who the fuck is Edward?! He sounds like an arrogant prick who needs to be busted down a few notches.

Well, I am glad you finally got this son of a bithc out. lol.

Brian still irks me. I'd love to see him get the shit beat out of him. Though, I am glad to see that Matt got shot in the leg. XD

Ya know...you have this uncanny ability to make me wake up early when you update. I don't know what it is, and I'm not sure how I feel about that.

Bitching aside, I'm excited for this. Brian's a twat as usual. Only this time it doesn't make me want to choke the shit out of him. Alicia...well. She has a death wish apparently, but she seems to have picked the killers who are more likely to protect her rather than off her-- for now anyway.