mwhaha! it's so much fun actually knowing the person who writes and when they're referring to real life people XD *coughs* besides that! I enjoyed this very much! Can't wait to see what you do next General.
It pretty good. Very mysterious. But you are using ALOT of periods xD. I know I do that sometimes too, but many people have complained about it so I just thought I would tell you. But its great =)