Summer - Comments

I really like this story, Post soon! :)

i LOVE this story :) keep on writing!!!

You are crazy!!! Your writing is AMAZING!! Your editing, general cleanliness and organization and everything that goes along with it! Really, really amazing job :) And the story itself is adorable! I don't know much about NeverShoutNEver (or Chris for that matter) but what I have heard about him compliments the story nicely as well. And I love how you incorporated Gracie in there as well, as an additional twist.
Nicely done!! :)
Can't wait for the next chapter!

I really enjoy this story- I like where it's going from here.
Please continue XD

D: Poor Dylan, Chris just needs to chill.

:D
Can't everyone just get along?
lmfaoo (:

I wonder if they are ever going to get along? (:

I quite like this. <3

Chris, why are you so mean to your new step-sister? :D

The first chapter was written extremely well. No mistakes at all.
Second chapter:
You could try to re-write-
(I say that as though there have been a significant amount. Ha. Ha ha ha.) Ex boyfriends.
to-
(I say that as though there have been a significant amount. Ha-ha.) Ex-boyfriends
So, there's only two 'ha-ha''s, and it should be italicized. And, on Ex boyfriends, there should be a - between Ex, and boyfriends. Which would make it Ex-boyfriends.
~
"MUUMMM! THEY'VE ARRIVED!"
Should be changed to:
Mum, they've arrived!
So, bolded, proper capitalization, and correct spelling of Mum.
~
"Wouldn't I just love to say I told you so".
Should be changed to:
Wouldn't I just love to say I told you so?
With a question mark at the end.
~
That's it! And, I did notice the dates. Aren't I a smart one? ;D
Good job! I love this so far!:D

The first chapter was written extremely well. No mistakes at all.
Second chapter:
You could try to re-write-
(I say that as though there have been a significant amount. Ha. Ha ha ha.) Ex boyfriends.
to-
(I say that as though there have been a significant amount. Ha-ha.) Ex-boyfriends
So, there's only two 'ha-ha''s, and it should be italicized. And, on Ex boyfriends, there should be a - between Ex, and boyfriends. Which would make it Ex-boyfriends.
~
"MUUMMM! THEY'VE ARRIVED!"
Should be changed to:
Mum, they've arrived!
So, bolded, proper capitalization, and correct spelling of Mum.
~
"Wouldn't I just love to say I told you so".
Should be changed to:
Wouldn't I just love to say I told you so?
With a question mark at the end.
~
That's it! And, I did notice the dates. Aren't I a smart one? ;D
Good job! I love this so far!:D

Sounds Interesting, can't wait for the next update (:

I love it already!

Sounds interesting(:
updatee:D

I luff it(: It's sad but I think I'm likeing how this may turn out. Update(:

love it..update soon(:

I liked it a whole lot. please update soon this story has caught my interest! :)

I liked that a lot.
more soon?

moreee !

more!