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  • Aluraune Lorenzo

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    @ Necrosocium
    You just continue to make my nights. ^^ Yes, Kaname is from VK. The way our threads worked was that anyone could basically use any character from any show--so it got a bit hectic. As for the confusion in plots, I blame that on the journal entries being based on events that happened in the RP we were all in. I never really anticipated outside readers >< I'm kinda embarrassed. Embarassed: Thank you sooo much for the attention. You really revived this whole thing. If you're interested in other reads he's in, Lead and Gold is a prelude-ish thing that gives some backstory. And uhmm...feel free to ask for any clarification! Thank you! Mr. Green

    -Aluraune
    June 30th, 2013 at 06:31am
  • rosamarie

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    Well, I finally caught up with the entire story! -woot- and I am still as in love with it as I was when I first began to read. Aluraune is a character I can actually relate to, as odd as that sounds, and I find myself loving him. Sometimes it's hard to understand what's happening, but I guess I shouldn't expect a journal to have every detail, so it's very realistic in that way. I guess all I have to say at this point then is to keep up the good work! In Love
    June 30th, 2013 at 05:16am
  • rosamarie

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    Okay, so I started reading "Adversary" and the name I saw at the beginning caught my eye, as well as the term "pure-blood". If I'm correct, isn't Kaname Kuran a vampire from Vampire Knight? I haven't watched the show in forever, but I remember his first name was Kaname and so I'm just curious tehe
    June 30th, 2013 at 04:42am
  • rosamarie

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    Ignore >.<
    June 30th, 2013 at 04:41am
  • rosamarie

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    I can't believe you don't have more comments on this! XD I stopped after a few chapters. I'm about to read "Maharet". But I thought I would go ahead and leave a comment and subscribe and all that good stuff first.

    I was looking through the horror section -backwards xD- when I found this, and I'm glad I decided to read it! This is written very well, and I can't find any grammatical errors. Some of the chapters are a little on the short side for my tastes, but considering that they are supposed to be journal entries, it makes sense. Anyhow, I absolutely love your vocabulary you've put into this as well, and I adore the way it's written. This is a very good story, and I'm really looking forward to more! I hope you get more readers too!
    June 29th, 2013 at 03:07am
  • toxic infatuation.

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    Wow, the latest chapter is very intriguing.
    August 1st, 2010 at 08:59am
  • toxic infatuation.

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    Oh my goodness, love. This is amazing. You should read Ava's story as well. I'm currently typing up her latest entry which will have Aluraune in it. :)
    July 1st, 2010 at 07:08am