Sitting Shotgun - Comments

Awe Ed is starting to fall for her especially when he had a dream of her. :)

I really liked the chapter. Ed's dream sounds, uhm, nice :).
It gets a bit confusing when in one chapter you use a first person POV and then in the next a third person POV. Just some piece of advice, is all.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Dude i ate a taco today! :D
Oh noo its the po po! D:

haha they starting to get comfortable with each other that they jumping on beds now..though it sucks for him that they broke his bed.
Great update :)

Omg that seems so fun! Jumping on beds! :D

Yay, they're having fun together :).
Jumping on beds is sooooooooooo fun, it really never grows old. You're just bound to have fun while doing that, no matter who you're with, lol.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
xox

this is a awsome story good thing you told me to check it out its soooooooo amazing !!!!!!! :D

Hahaha oh wow what nice dares:D

I like this, update soon please (:

lol I like this truth and dare game..they have some interesting dares here.
great update. :)

I love how they're both always trying to get on the other's nerves :).
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

Good chapter Leanne! I really do want to know more about those people. But this seems to be getting more interesting with each new chapter added :).
xox

lol they seem to be getting along good at the moment. I wonder what she did to go to jail for though.
great update. :D

New reader!
I like this story already!
I can't wait for more:D

i really enjoyed reading it! i like the whole third person pov for ed. it works well (:
i cant wait to see what the rest of the story brings :D

I don't think the chapter was that bad actually. Those first few chapters to get the story started are always the most difficult ones to write.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
xox

It was pretty good. I think the third person perspective is actually kind of nice when its from edgar's point of view.

Wow, it is really amazzziinngg! :0 Lawl, I like it lots, thnx telling me to check it out!
I can't wait for an update.
Ima subscribe xD :]

really good XD i like it a lot

Oh i love this!!!!!!!!! lol can't wait for an update :)