I frown, “Maybe so, but their relationship was important to you…”
He looks at me, his eyes sincere as whispers, “So was ours.”
That was my jaw-dropper. Oh my gosh, I think I've fallen for a fictional character. It was so heart melting. I mean, the guy looks like a complete jerk, just showing up and wanting a ride after years of no communication, but there's a reason for it! Oh, I love this, Carrie, I really do.
Intriguing!!! I love the way she just accepts to go on a ride with him! she doesn't even ask permission... that's a thing I don't think I couldn't do! anyway, great beginning!
Gosh, I'm loving this. I love road trip stories..or at least partial road trip stories...^_^ And I love the road signs that break up your story. It's awesome.
Oh, Carrie, I really hope you continue this, and soon! It just sounds like one of those stories that make you feel warm inside, and wish to the stars that your life was exactly like that. Please update this soon!
i like it too, im excited to read about it, i love stories where the prologue makes me actually want to read it, because sometimes prologues suck, but i really like this one.