Window In The Skies - Comments

well, i didn't love it, per say, 'cause Adie died, but....... you know.

oh my god. that made me cry. that was amazing. i loved it! ♥

:cheese: That was absolutely bloody perfect.

You’re just the one facing life alone.
That line was really...powerful. It comes up and hits you in the face. I like you how made it its own paragraph, too. made it stand out more, added to the effect. :cute:

The tears begin to roll down your cheeks. Screw being a man. That means nothing. Why does it hurt to cry?
I really liked these few sentences. The fact they're so short really adds emphasis to what Billie's saying.

So yes, wonderful fic. I really enjoyed it. Well, not enjoyed enjoyed it, because Adie's dead (omgno:) but, well you know what I mean. ;)

Oh my god Eggeh... How do you write so beautifully? The way you write, it's just...wow. You're so descriptive and it makes the story come alive.

The doctors remain uselessly quiet. How can anyone be so calm when your life has just been torn to shreds? Adrienne Armstrong is still immobile as you begin to cry in desperation and despair…

Your wife is now heading for that window in the skies.
This made me so, so depressed. Lets hope it never happens. :arms: I know how hard it was for you to write this. I love yoou. :cute:

oh my god

that is so sad

oh my god.
that is amazing.
that moved me.. in anyway one can be moved by a oneshot.
your details are just amazing, and i felt what billie was feeling. it was... beautiful and i cannot think of a better word.

"You’re just the one facing life alone."
and that's a realization we are all afraid to find out.
You are a very insightful person and you just know how people feel. That is amazing, and a must for any writer. This is the only thing I've read of yours and I'm off to read more.

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OhMyGosh! That was so tragically beautiful. It was written so well. As What'sHerName said you should continue it, about Billie's life after Adie and the kids. It would be so good. And I'd suscribe as well.

Beautiful chapter. I was thinking the same thing...

OhMyGosh! That was so tragically beautiful. It was written so well. As What'sHerName said you should continue it, about Billie's life after Adie and the kids. It would be so good. And I'd suscribe as well.

That was so well written that I cried too...

awwww
it's sooo sad
but really well written :)

Absolutely beautiful. So, so sad but beautifully written all the same. You are a very skilled writer, this actually made me cry and I hardly ever cry!!
This shouldn't be a oneshot, you should continue it as a story, I would subscribe if you did!
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