Primitive Instincts - Comments

It was UHmazing :) read it in one night lol. I hope there's a sequel!

LOVED IT! I hope there is a sequel. I will read it.

Yay I love this!

i love the story and think if u maybe wanted to do another it would be cool to do one on seth, he's such a cutie and hardly anybody has stories on him. keep up the good work!

Hola everybody!!!
i am the friend actually(:
I made an account on here so i could see the comments on this story and stuff!
To Silhouette: i totally get it. I actually have A.D.D. so a lot of the times when my thoughts get to fast my fingers get too fast and then i have spelling and grammar mess ups and it's just disastorous (i spelled that wrong. Sorry.) and then i get side-tracked and forget to proof-read and stuff.
And i know what you mean about the whole, two story line things, i just didn't really even think about it until you said it. But seriously, thank you! i need to criticism!!!!
Oh, and of course, thanks to everyone else who commented!!! i really appreciate anyone who put up with my misspelled words and horrible grammar for all the chapters. haha
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type in primitive instincts and then go to my profile!!! i'm writing a new story called Not That Guy
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anyways, thanks!! bye!! (:

I freakin loved this story to bits :)

There were a lot of grammatical errors. Your friend is in dire need of spell-check. She put dashes in words that didn't need them, like backpack, and she didn't capitalize 'I' half of the time.

Still, I'm a sucker for this kind of thing, so I read... to a point.

It seemed to me like there were two stories here. Like everything after the point where she gets away from her adoptive family should be a sequel. That's not criticism, just a thought.

I enjoyed reading this, but I would have enjoyed it a lot more if it had been proofread.

it's amazing and i love it so update

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!! I read all 24 chapters at once. I just couldn't stop. I can't wait for the next update to be posted. Tell your friend she has done and amazing job at this story.

its amazing

i love this story. your friend is really good!! update when you get back from camp!! i want to read more

i love this story. your friend is really good!! update when you get back from camp!! i want to read more

when is the next chapter gonna be up for this story? I really like it. Tell your friend I say great job!!

I lurrrrrrrve your friend! She is so freaking awesome! XD

wow tell your friend that really good XD! IT SOO SAD