Wow... Just... WOW! I don't understand why they left though. He didn't do anything wrong. Obviously the gun went off. I have a feelign that Pete squeezed the trigger too. I don't know. It just doesn't seem good that they're running.
HOLY CRAP! Always the creepy cliffhangers. The person above this comment is right. So let's hope this turns out well, sorry if my comments are slow in the next I don't know how long. Bye, update soon.
Well.... It's considered self defense, and considering what he was trying to do I honestly don't think that there were too many options left there. It sucks but whatever. Pete went on a all out psychotic rampage. Seriously? And nothing was premeditated or anything like that so it's all good. :) yay. At least Ryan and Brendon are okay though.
HOLY FUCKING SHIT! SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT! I CANT BELIEVE THAT JUST HAPPENED! IT'S JUST LIKE O MY FUCKING GOD!! brendon is so screwed! he's going to go to jail and never see ryan again! shit! (thank you for dedicating a chapter to me, it means alot ) :) update ASAP!!!
Holy shit! You have to be like... one of the BEST writers ever!!!! I... wow.... that was... hmm, I really have no words how to describe that chapter... ily for writing this! Can't wait for more. (I suck at leaving comments... Sorry ): )
I just want you to know that I decided to read the last chapter before I went to bed last night, and I was all "NOOOOOOO! CLIFFHANGER! *is sad*" and then had a dream that it got updated again. But then I woke up and it didn't and I was like "fml." xD
Don't hate on Patrick! It's not his fault! Here's what he was thinking: "Okay, Petenis probably just pissed at me and going to blow off steam. I'll call Kaela and well go get brendon and take care of this." he's trying. D: he could have totally sided with Pete and helped him kidnap Ryan.
Fuck you, you left a mean cliffhanger! Not really, (about being all mad at you) you know I loves youu! But that was a mean cliffhanger... Dude, Pete is insane, and seriously did Kaela and Patrick not think Pete might do something to Ryan?! This is so unfair I fucking hate Pete! I didn't really think much of him at the beginning but now, oh NOW he's freakin dead, because no one better even dare to touch Ryan! If I was in this story, I would be the smart one who's all, oh hey, Pete might just have happened to basically say ge was going to harm Ryan, so instead of not doing anything, I'm not going to take a chance, and I am going to go over to Ryan's house and kick Pete's ass! Come on, Ryan better do some smart talking and let out his little Ryan-charm and get Pete to change his mind about this, because he better not leave with him, and there is no way in hell I'm going to let Pete kill him. Bye, glad you didn't almost die, update soon.