Well clearly you are a genious along with harlequinxlovers. I NEED to know what is going on here with Jon and with Pete. Thanks for making this night spectacular, and how I hope (to God he was worth it. When the lights are dim and your heart is racing as your fingers touch his skin. Sorry Lyings Is The Most Fun… came to mind XD) you write something else up soon!
i'm the only person who knew that pete was going to kiss ryan! so that did not shock me! and i am proud of that! also, i think it would be really awesome if jon and spencer got together (though jon would have to end it nicely with kaela, and also, what did jon do to ruin the evening? I have to know) can't wait to read more!
This story has the best cliffhangers. I swear, I'm subscribed to a million stories on here, but none of them torture me like this one does. Fuck, I was not expecting that from Pete. What's going to happen? And what did Jon do? D: And is Ryan's dad being serious, or is he still a huge dick head?
Sorry, I'm rambling. The point, because I promise there is one, is that this story is amazing. I love it. Update soon, okay? (:
Okay. He is not allowed to be mad at Ryan. He has absolutely no right at all to ever be mad because he is not a real part of his life. I'm glad that Ms. Urie hit him. I kinda wish that Brendon would have let her do more. I hate that man. >.<!! Ryan doesn't have to, but I sure as heck can.
NO WAY! shit! george is going to go ape shit! why did ryan have to admit to him that he has a boyfriend! shit! and wow, ms. urie is one BAD ASS mum. you have no idea how much i love this, update soon, OR ELSE! (just so you know, i'm not a threat at all. harmless as a shark) update!
Oh my God. For some reason, the last person I was expecting it to be, was his dad. Gah, and another cliffhanger! D: Have I mentioned how much I love this story? No? Well, it's a lot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Dun dun DUN DUN! The suspense is killing me here! SOO MANY CLIFFHANGERS! *dies* I shall resurrect from the dead when you update if you don't update soon i will be dead forever!! how will it feel having that on your conscience? XD
I loved Don't Hold Your Breath and I'm sure this will be just as good! Heck, I love it already and I can't wait to find out who was at the door! Update soon! :)
Yesss!!!! you updated! with a cliffhanger!? come on, baby give me a break, break, break. have some composure, where is your posture? you're pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger ALL WRONG! sorry. i don't know how that happened. anyway, who was at the doooorrrrr? owww, i just cracked my neck like 156789 times in a row. sorry, i forgot to take my pills today. perscribe pills to offset the shakes, to offset the pills, you kknow you gotta take it a day at a tiiiiimmmmmeeeeee. sorry! update soon!
Ahhhh! Cliffhanger! I hate them but love them at the same time xD Are you going to update soon? Pretty please with Rydon on top? :$ wow am I lame, haha. Excellent story by the way, it's been a while since you updated when I saw it I literally smiled like a freak. Gah, who's at the door?!