Racetrack Drama - Comments

Your use of imagery here is really good! I'm not really a one-shot fan, but I know good writing when I see it. The syntax you use is really useful in building the plot to the climax of the story, which is really good seeing as the story has to do with an adrenaline rush! Keep up the good writing!

i like how this turned out. it was a little under the word-minimum, but that's not a biggie. it followed really nicely with the video. i liked it a lot!