Read through it again and try to catch a few more of the mistakes. I don't want to point them all out, love. Other than that, it made me smile and blush a bit. Oh, costume parties are the best, though now they always remind me of... Storm to Pass, I believe, where Coby ended up switching costumes with... Jess, I think, and was dressed as a fairy for like, have of a chapter. Oh, good times. <333 I love this story. (:
Duuuude, this was a great length, so shush it. It was exactly what I needed. After a rather... emotional night, I was glad to finally sit down and read this, so thank you. The little girl, Lily, or whatever, she gets on my neeeerves. I will fucking punch the little thing out. Eliminations... *shakes head* I think you really captured what everyone was feeling pretty well, cause I was almost getting choked up reading it. Oh, and Riki = looooooove. (: He makes me smile. So, I pretty much loved this. Can't wait to see what happens next. <333
So, if I comment on Amy's page... Does it show up on Gabbie's, too? *shrug* Anyway, I like it. Try not to like, smother everything with drama, though. We need some chill chapters, too. Just keep that in mind. Too much drama is simply suffocating. Heheh. But yeah, I'm already subscribed and shit. <3
RIKI! :D I love that man so, so much. Anywhosies, yes, everyone loves a good reality show fic, which is exactly what this is. I love it, Ames. Only, god, Gabbz daughter... Bitch from hell. Holy shit. >____> I can't wait to get more of this. :D Oh, Chris. Oh, James. Oh, Sheeeeeeeeeep. (: I love them all so much. But, I love you even more!
<333 I love this story. (: