Take a Bite of My Heart Tonight - Comments

  • The Pumpkin Princess

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    AWWW!!!!!! This story, both stories, ROCKED!!!!!
    I think I'm going to read it again.
    Thanks for giving me something to look forward to on those off days. It made me smile. :-)
    You're amazing, remember that. ;-)
    November 27th, 2011 at 08:48pm
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    :')
    November 27th, 2011 at 06:00pm
  • KittenRawr

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    jk i love this story so much and ill be sad to see it go and I hit enter before i was done typing :)
    November 27th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • KittenRawr

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    nooo!!!
    November 27th, 2011 at 03:28am
  • Skidaddle13

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    Awwwwwww:3333
    October 2nd, 2011 at 04:22am
  • KittenRawr

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    amazing, both chappy's as always and I can't wait for more :)
    October 1st, 2011 at 07:13pm
  • iamFINE

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    OHDANG THERE'S GOING TO BE A BABY. HECK YESSSSSSSSSS.
    <3 Manda
    July 26th, 2011 at 07:47am
  • Unexpected.

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    for some reason i found the ending, after Matt and Addison ate the strawberries and then made love? that was the sweetest thing to me. didn't go into detail, but then when Matt was shaking and opened his eyes to see Addison smiling at him, i dunno. i really, really liked that.
    and...i think...the baby...will be a still birth.
    no, that'd be terrible. but an interesting, horrible plot twist. i dunno whats gonna happen but i cant wait to see (:
    July 26th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • KittenRawr

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    OHMYGOD BABY!!!!!!!.......sorry about that, but yay baby, finally! stupid sluts flirting with Addison!
    July 25th, 2011 at 08:07pm
  • Unexpected.

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    well, the beginning was by far my favorite part of this chapter (: i don't mean the sex scene! the...feeling Addison still inside Matthew scene. i thought it was..cute in a sense, slightly endearing. really, i find Matt to be both of those things: cute, adorable, endearing, sweet, but i still see him as a little bit manly, y'know?
    anyway. i'm not sure what to think of the rest of it. i mean obviously i'm not a fan of Matt's father. so i dunno.
    update soon? (:
    July 14th, 2011 at 05:46am
  • Slash-a-holic

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    love!!! Missed this story!
    July 8th, 2011 at 11:23am
  • xidontloveyoux

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    I barely started the prequel last night and now I'm reading this one :D update soon... It's amazing :)
    July 1st, 2011 at 09:28am
  • NeverEndingDarkness

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    yay!!!
    i loved it!!
    XD
    man i havent commented in forver...
    anywho..
    i loved the chapter
    i absolutely cant wait for the next one
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    so please update soon!!!
    ><
    June 30th, 2011 at 01:53am
  • KittenRawr

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    so cute hun!
    June 29th, 2011 at 10:48pm
  • RebeccaLynnn

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    wow, this is amazing. I just finished reading the prequel, and then this, and both of them are amazing. Hope you can post more soon. It's so good, and I can't wait to see what happens when Matthew meets with his mom. Also can't wait to see how the guys do once Bridget is born.
    I really love how protective Addison is of Matthew and his unborn baby girl, if only every guy was that caring and devoted. Please post more soon. =)
    June 28th, 2011 at 02:58am
  • Hot Chelle Rae

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    WOW! THIS IS AMAZING :)
    June 15th, 2011 at 03:08am
  • Slash-a-holic

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    AMAZING CHAPTER! although its filly, its a happy filler, and its nice. im sorry about writers block and how you've been feeling! I hope something majorly AMAZING happens to brighten your spirits, because we are a family on this website and we care about each other! so feel better soon!
    we <3 you!
    May 20th, 2011 at 07:38am
  • The Pumpkin Princess

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    Hey. For serious. This whole life thing is gonna get better.
    And whether you were serious or not, I'm taking you as serious. Life will still be worthit, today and tomorrow and the day after that.
    I take the whole 'life' thing way too seriously. So don't joke about it.
    Great story. I'll wait for the awesome updates. <3
    May 20th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • Unexpected.

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    now that that's over, i jsut want t osay that i am very very happy you updated (: and with how adorable that was, it was so worth the wait.
    seriously, probably the most adorable chapter (in my opinion) of both stories so far. ah, it was just so cute (:
    for some reason, i think my favorite part was when Addison was assuring Matthew that the whole thing after Ron didn't bother him all that much. y'know, Matt's 'bullshit.' i was glad they had that little conversation, it was sort of nice (:
    and i seriously really like and appreciate- does that sound right? -how much you put into small details. as in, how Addison rubs Matt's tummy. it's sweet and endearing.
    okay, long comment, yay :D
    update soon?

    ooh, random piece of information: i think, Addison's my favorite pov to read, and character (: if i had to narrow it down to just one...hehe (:
    May 20th, 2011 at 01:30am
  • Unexpected.

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    YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    AND YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 20th, 2011 at 01:26am