I really, really wanted to say that the first time I read through this story I liked it, and connected a little, but, not a whole lot. This time I nearly started crying because I could relate so much. Thank you for writing this. I definitely think you deserve more comments than you have. This story's amazing.
Only one page of comments??? Gosh, you deserve way more credit for this >_< This is amazing, the style is just... Wow. Damn amazing (: I can't wait for more!
This is NOT cliche!!! I felt so connected with her!!! I know how Scarlett feels!!! You're a great writer!! Put more up! I'm subscribing and looking forward to what you write next
definitely enjoy the concept of this. i remember those days of being an insecure high schooler and picking apart every flaw. it'll be interesting to see where this leads, for sure. please dont keep us waiting long! :)
ONE comment?! Okay, so what's different about this story is the idea of the list. I think that if you keep that a common theme, it will be a head-above the other stories like this. "It's really all about what others think about you." -Some lines, like this, really spoke out to me. You're right, all/most teen girls go through this.