Short and sweet, I love it! You have a great way of describing things.
July 4th, 2010 at 06:03pm
Wow, that was so weird, In a good way :D weird is always good.
I was fighting for my life. It was brutal, it was gruesome, I loved that line I don't know why, it was descriptive and all that.
I think you did a great job on describing the setting and whats happening.
It made me wondering what was after them. What is after them?
I thought this was a great one-shot even thought it was short.
The only thing I would suggest is the writing, the colour even I found it difficult to read since it blended with the backround quite a bit. Who knows maybe that's just me.
Zoe x