Reduced To Tears. - Comments

flyer. (850)

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Mmm, nice job! This is quite well written, and doesn't have a completly cliche plotline. The summary is fine, too.
My only tip would be to uncapitalize the summary. Only the first one needs to be capitalized, and when I see a summary like that I assume the entire story is gramatically incorrect.(It wasn't) So you might wanna look into that :)

October 11th, 2010 at 09:59pm

OH MY GAGA! (100)

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you posted my story! i went onto your profile and saw RTT and i was all like, BITCH DID NOT! then i went and read the credit thing and now i'm like <3

July 4th, 2010 at 02:40am

vampirrie (100)

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I have just read the full story, And i must say this is an amazing story, and very well writtern :)
Surprised to be the first to comment on it tho =D
Great work xx

June 28th, 2010 at 03:42pm