This was really good. I was a little confused at first and was thinking it was somebody else like Ray or Bob, but then you gave away clues that it was someone they actually couldn't see. I really liked it and how you described the sad desperation of her wanting them to see her, and the ?confusion? when they finally did. It was really tragic, but in a beautiful way. I love the way you write, so kudos to you!
January 21st, 2008 at 10:41pm